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why don't you hear me?

you asked if i was hungry, and i said, "yes, yes i am."
and you said okay, and then you didn't do anything.
ten minutes later, i asked why you had asked me,
and you said, "i was gonna make you something,
but you told me you weren't hungry."

i only sighed and folded my hands,
since this has happened only too many times before.

WHY CAN'T YOU HEAR ME?
CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW, NOW THAT I'M SCREAMING,
I'M SHOUTING AND EVEN THE DOG JUMPED,
THE CAT RAN DOWN THE HALL AND MY NEIGHBORS WENT OUTSIDE
AND YOU STILL CAN'T HEAR ME,
YOU CAN'T HEAR ME WHEN I TELL YOU I STILL NEED YOU
AND YOU CAN'T HEAR ME WHEN I TELL YOU YOU'RE HURTING ME
AND YOU SURE CAN'T HEAR ME WHEN I ASK YOU TO PLEASE BE GENTLE,
AND I JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW YOU CAN'T HEAR ME
WHEN I'M SCREAMING RIGHT AT YOU.

WHY DON'T YOU EVER LISTEN?
i am not leaves on the roof, you can hear me just fine.

this isn't for you, ignore it.
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:iconcrashcoursewomb:
ahh, o: lovelyy. [:
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L-forever Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist
thanks dear (:
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:icondevelindiskies:
you're so very good with emotions.
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L-forever Oct 19, 2009  Hobbyist
thank you (:
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:iconiheldyoucloser:
"WHY CAN'T YOU HEAR ME?
CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW, NOW THAT I'M SCREAMING,
I'M SHOUTING AND EVEN THE DOG JUMPED,
THE CAT RAN DOWN THE HALL AND MY NEIGHBORS WENT OUTSIDE
AND YOU STILL CAN'T HEAR ME,
YOU CAN'T HEAR ME WHEN I TELL YOU I STILL NEED YOU
AND YOU CAN'T HEAR ME WHEN I TELL YOU YOU'RE HURTING ME
AND YOU SURE CAN'T HEAR ME WHEN I ASK YOU TO PLEASE BE GENTLE,
AND I JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW YOU CAN'T HEAR ME
WHEN I'M SCREAMING RIGHT AT YOU.

WHY DON'T YOU EVER LISTEN?"

HELL YES.
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:iconl-forever:
L-forever Oct 17, 2009  Hobbyist
thanks for the :+fav:
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:iconnellie379:
uppercase voice, used correctly. very nice, i liked it. felt the rage.
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:iconl-forever:
L-forever Oct 17, 2009  Hobbyist
thanks (:
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:icongrimsbloody:
I liked the way the beginning played out; and the ending was really good too. Alot of emotion in it. You are good at writing with emotion.
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L-forever Oct 17, 2009  Hobbyist
oh, well i'm glad you think so (:

thank you for the :+fav:
:heart:
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